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Wednesday, May 12, 2010

Confusion

I feel claustrophobic inside...
I feel clogged up...
Drained out of everything good and sane.

My horoscope tells me to stay calm.
To stay focused and to ignore the little trivialities of life.

You must think this is a Goth's blog.
No , It isn't
Its probably an average 17 year old's.

Are we all like that?
Confused? flustered? tangled? perplexed?
You must be laughing on the irony displayed in the above question.
All synonyms of the same word.

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  2. Why do you think that we'd think its a Goth's blog? Merely because of the scanty use of black you go on with this stereotyped attitude towards Goths, or is it the depressive sulking? Goth's as you say have their own subculture, yes some people misunderstand the basic meaning and classify them into a 'cult'. Emo on the other hand is just a term derived from emotional and I personally feel that the word emo would be more apt for usage in this particular poem of yours. Besides teenagers are unstable emotional beings, so highlighting the usage of Goth in the wrong light is just not nice.
    (Ok this came out really rude and I spent an hour(make that 2) fixing it, but made no progress. Trying to get the messege across that I didn't mean to be rude, as you may have found it.)
    See what you made the poor fellow do:
    Ray Mathew:

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  4. Look what you made the poor guy do:
    Ray Mathew: Bang head on wall
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    *7
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  5. Meg here.

    WHAT ARE U TRYING TO SAY?
    I HAVE NO FREAKING IDEA!
    IM JUST MERELY STATING A FACT IN THE POEM THAT ALMOST ALL MY POEMS HAVE HAD A DARK TOUCH RECENTLY AND HENCE NO ONE SHOULD MISUNDERSTAND AND THINK THAT I AM A GOTH!

    IM NOT STEREOTYPING ANYONE! AND I HAVE NO IDEA WHAT COMMENTS U DELETED OR WHAT RAY MATHEW DID!

    And EMO is not the word I want to write there.
    I want to write GOTH and that's what is written.I like the colour black. :|

    Its okay , if you are rude, I like the fact that you commented and made a point.

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